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Read Poems by margarette mcdonald

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I'm Broken

My feelings have being crushed
My feelings have being hurt
My feelings are now in the dirt
You made these tears
Opened up new fears
I know the feeling of true pain 
Your ride was insane
Took my heart for a race
Only not to finish
You didn't even come in last place
Hope it was fun
Now that i've landed on the ground
My feelings have being crushed
My feelings have being hurt
Now my feelings sit in the dirt
You woke me up now I'm alert
My heart has being shattered
Now to mend the peices

Copyright © margarette mcdonald | Year Posted 2011


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  1. Date: 2/23/2016 10:01:00 PM

    margarette mcdonald, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 1/2/2016 12:19:00 AM

    MARGARETTE, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF HAPPY 2016. ...... SKAT
  1. Date: 3/13/2011 3:35:00 PM

    very nice poem.I've felt that feeling a time or two
  1. Date: 3/5/2011 8:21:00 AM

    Very heart felt write...take care and don't ever let this happen to you again...good luck, Julie
  1. Date: 3/3/2011 10:46:00 AM

    How sad for you but this too shall come to pass.