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Scye By the Bye

I can not see the stars in the city;
But they can see me.
I can see the brightest ones;
So they can still guide me.
So it doesn't matter;
I know they are still out there.
Even if the sky is covered with clouds;
They are copper colored clouds that still light my way.
And will never leave me in the dark.

My eyes hold light.

So close yet so far;
So bright in a galaxy of darkness;
Glitter on the canvas of the cosmos;
Each spec, a speck;
Colossal size;
For light to meet our eyes;
Where even the biggest,
Has no comparison in size;
Big or tall,
Bright enough to be seen by all.

Our eyes hold light.

Copyright © Jaylyne Doramus | Year Posted 2010


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  1. Date: 5/13/2016 11:39:00 PM

    jaylyne, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
  1. Date: 5/12/2016 9:01:00 AM

    Jaylyne,, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
  1. Date: 12/23/2010 1:14:00 PM

    Nice title and equally nice deep meaningful write the stars, Jaylyne
  1. Date: 12/23/2010 12:35:00 PM

    With help from my friend "Stu" His gift to me, his writing from thought off my thoughts making a beautiful duet of words forming absolute poetry.