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Far Away

i want to travel the world with you
show you places that you have never seen
give you a reason to let loose
if just a bit, so step out of that routine
close your eyes, imagine the world whole
see the places yet to be discovered
the places only few have endeavored
and all the places yet to be uncovered
enjoy the sights and wonders
and bask in its beauty, not its history
call forth the courage to live
make a mark, make the memories!
i want to be with you through it all
make it that much interesting
give you more than you need
am sure you will find it all riveting
Know that all i want is to show you everything
well at least something, in fact just a tad bit
at least let me make you smile and laugh
give you some sort of incentive not to call it quits
i just want us to be us
traveling is just something to do
it isn't to assure we stay together
its to assure we do it all together.

Because at the end of the day,
I care about you!

Copyright © Eliel Vasquez | Year Posted 2016


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