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luchando por el amor

Being alone but not lonely 
Enjoying silence and appreciating my space
Then he says you're my one and only 
And how he's dreamt of my embrace

Up the walls go higher
Deeper the foundation is built 
But nothing seems to extinguish his fire
In the blade goes to its hilt

He stagers, he tumbles, he falls to his knees 
A glimpse in his eyes and and the truth is seen
Mi corazón in its place is put at ease 
He's unharmed and looks up with a smile so sheen

Being alone but not lonely 
Enjoying silence and appreciating my space
Then i says you're my one and only 
And how i’ve dreamt of your embrace

Copyright © niketa mckenzie | Year Posted 2016

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  1. Date: 6/14/2016 4:39:00 PM

    Nice piece. I like its use of metophor. In the third verse is the that a typo "stager" I Instead used " staggered" please. Lovely piece

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