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The Girl Sue

i just chilled around the garage sale
my mom made me come
i so wanted to bail
any who these kawinkadinks are for a bum

i turn my head to the left
i turn my head to the right
it had so much shiz it wasn't even worth no theft
with crap piling high it was such a disgusting sight

whoa, again i turned my head to the right
I saw a shimmer in the light
what could this be
"cool brass monkey"

oh hi mom can you buy it
back home the perfect spot on my dresser it did sit
ha ha, who's my little hobo son!
hey! your just jealous you don't have one
can you get this stuff at the market thanks Hun

brass monkey and me walking down the street
if there was a girl i ever did meet
I'm sure she would say it was sweet
i now any teenager would say the same
if any ever came

but no girl came running down the street
and no cool teen ever came to meet

my head soaped down low
cause i found no one i know
something came out of place
me and brass monkey fell from loving grace

i let out a great sigh
then a gasp
as it rolled away from my grasp
then for the first time i did cry

i was to pissed to see
the girl standing next to me
"are you OK"
i think but please stay

it was not the same features the monkey portrayed
her skin contrasted the bright day
her eyes were 2 round scoops of chocolate Sunday
and had long black hair that tickled my face as i lay

and there was that special silence that i was enveloped by
looks like that hurt
ya, it did, i let out a long sigh
"seeing you made it stop" i did flirt

seriously though it hurts so please walk me home
she pulled me to my feet
taking my hand, she walked me home

i ignored the limp leg and kept strong
so you haven't been here long
no, i wanted her to go on and on
in that sing song voice
people didn't like me
i didn't have much of a choice
i looked up and her eyes
said she disagreed

she and i lingered at the footstep
she tip toed to come even with my step
our tounges danced around another
and arms wrapped around each other

the kiss did eventually finish
and the girl had to diminish
i closed and locked the door
allowing her to lock inside my core

Copyright © Jeremy Fredde | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 3/22/2010 5:47:00 PM

don't worry about the trash on the bottom... this was a good write

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