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Slowing breathes

Stop breathing can i...?
No i can't...whyyy donttt i....
BECAUSE .....
 The day will come that i willl start slowing breathes
And i will Let my heart cry for air.... let my lungs gasps for air like a  man does in the deeppp darkkk  ocean while drowning ..let the air leave my body like they never belong to me...let it all go with my last breath into the thin air and let all my existence vanish awayyyy and  the feeling that it will not matter what happens after as i am  already behind all this ...!
The salty water running down from eyes through the chicks of the people who cares for me or pretend to... will not  be effective because i am not there anymore ...!

The last trembling breathes leaving my body will take my soul with them.... where they flow...the soul of mine which is staying in my last breath  will be passed and touched by many people and  when they will breath the breath that i breathed out i may live in somebodys body but will eventually leave that body to....! And thats what will be going in loops....again and again after i die with my slowing breathes....!

Written by me....!

Copyright © Kareena Patil | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 4/26/2025 10:55:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

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