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Melting In The Sun

The Fog covering the sky
Like a blanket bringing it to darkness
People running, Creatures scattering
To escape the cold
Men, women, cats and dogs alike
All running to flee the dark sky
Flies buzzing, to elude the harsh damp air,
Noises of cars screeching to avoid destruction
As some of  them fail
Then as if destroying it’s cage 
A light breaking through to the sky
A red warm fire across the horizon
Burning, Melting,
Bright smiles looking up
Looking up to the melting sky

Copyright © A.R. Sword | Year Posted 2010


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  1. Date: 2/7/2016 2:31:00 AM

    A.R. Sword, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
  1. Date: 9/13/2015 8:34:00 AM

    Awesome poem
  1. Date: 1/18/2010 9:39:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart with us today in your poetry A.R. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration. Love, Carol
  1. Date: 1/18/2010 3:23:00 AM

    Great use of imagery A.R, nice work...Raul