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Child Killer

Where'd you put the body
When the deed was done?
What'd you have to say
To lure him in?
What kinda lies didja have to tell
A tale syrupy-sweet?
Was there any guilt at all
As you held his little hand?
Did you even start to stall
Before spilling blood on the sand?

You know you took him down
Probably Better you than them
You swear it's a mercy 
As you pull the blade
But that story's getting thin
So there's blood on your hands
And now you're a man
Now what's your plan?
Child killer.....

You start out your new life
With some debt and a good wife
Trying to never think of him
Memories, you can hide
But dreams sneak outside
And play with your inner mind
By the time you quit school
Tired of being a tool
Ten years had slid aside
You can still hear his screams
In your tattered, ragged dreams
Echos that never died

You know you took him down
Probably Better you than them
You swear it's a mercy 
As you pull the blade
But that story's getting thin
So there's blood on your hands
And now you're a man
Now what's your plan?
Child killer.....

Why'd ya do it?.... Where'd ya lay him?.... Why'd you lie?

Who's the bad guy?.... Who's the victim?.... Who's this image in the mirror?

You know you took him down
Probably Better you than them
You swear it's a mercy 
As you pull the blade
But that story's getting thin
So there's blood on your hands
And now you're a man
Now what's your plan?
Child killer.....

The world doesn't leave us much choice
We have to kill our inner-child's voice
Or they will do it for us

I want to understand
Is it better by my hand
Than to have someone do it for me?

Copyright © Jim David | Year Posted 2013

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  1. Date: 7/25/2013 10:39:00 AM

    You know the answer to your question..Strong write...
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 3:57:00 AM

    congrats on win Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 12:30:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning spot Jim xx
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 9:07:00 PM

    Jim, . CONGRATS <3 SKAT
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:54:00 PM

    thanks!
  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:26:00 PM

    HI JIM, , thank you for supporting my contest... CONGRATULATIONS.... :-) :-) :-) LINDA
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:40:00 PM

    thank you!!!
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 6:19:00 PM

    Oh this, this is great and so poignant and relevant. Great job!

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