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Read Poems by L'nass Shango

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Now I must ponder your meaning
The coming of a smile is like a ship
Sometimes it is swallowed by the horizon
But you have this thought on your lip
And my heart was a sail before
Carrying me where I did not want to go
But you keep coming and coming
And I can no longer pant softly nor slow
It is the sweet beginning beginning sweet
But why me, all my castles fell like sand
My dream is just a crumpled sheet
And evening curled up like a flower in my hand.

Copyright © L'nass Shango | Year Posted 2013


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  1. Date: 4/8/2017 5:57:00 AM

    Reminds me of song Sail Away Silvery Moon. Moving with much emotion. Even noticed Funom liked it. Jim Horn
  1. Date: 1/24/2014 3:49:00 PM

    What a great poem. Its nice reading your piece once again. Keep on writing please.
  1. Date: 12/24/2013 5:17:00 AM

    L Nass --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
  1. Date: 6/16/2013 4:22:00 AM

    L'Nass, it has been some years since I have been here. You are so blessed with making words come alive. I love this poem. "my heart was a sail before Carrying me where I did not want to go" is very meaningful for me right now. This just shows the helplessness of man's destiny.
  1. Date: 5/11/2013 4:50:00 PM

    L Nass :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda
  1. Date: 4/10/2013 10:36:00 PM

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:47:00 AM

    How happy i am to have found your poetry again.I feel blessed with this beauty.