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The undestined

They don't frolic in a flurry of snow, 
or muck about in fantasies, daydreaming. 
Neither hand reaches for another, 
their two souls of desire, brimming. 
For they are not rivers, 
but mountains, tall, standing.

Copyright © Sue San | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 2/6/2019 11:03:00 PM

so beautiful lines- their two souls of desire, brimming. /For they are not rivers, /but mountains, tall, standing.// like it
Date: 1/22/2019 6:49:00 PM

Sue, this is how I started learning about poetry. Up at the top - see where it says TYPES of POEMS? Click on it. There are different types listed under each letter of the alphabet, and it tells you how to write each type. I still use it and I have been doing this for almost a year. Types I found fun and easy at first were: tanka, diminished hexaverse, rhyme, haiku, kimo. Try it. You can soupmail me if you get stuck. Just click on the little letter at the top and send me a text.
Date: 1/22/2019 5:23:00 AM

Sue, welcome to Poetry Soup. You have found us at last, and I am glad! A wonderful first poem posted. I dare guess there are hundreds of others as this surely is not your first one. It is way too polished to be.