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Holding on to summer days

Invisible bars on my window sill
Summer breeze set me free
Popping seaweed bubbles on the beach
Screaming out but never heard

Summer breeze set me free
Beach sticks on a shard of glass
Screaming out but never heard
Innocence being swept away

Beach sticks on a shard of glass
My Baby self never was
Innocence being swept away
Holding on to summer days

My Baby self never was
Invisible bars on my window sill
Holding on to summer days
Popping seaweed bubbles on the beach

Copyright © ngaire patiole | Year Posted 2012

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  1. Date: 2/5/2016 3:24:00 PM

    Ngaire, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA

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