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(Written after seeing a scary movie late last Friday night. 
 I think it was actually called "Lake Eden"  but I changed 
the title for sake of meter) the actors drove on left side of
the road but it didn't seem to be England! Does anyone 
know of this movie?)

Take care if you should visit Eden’s Lake,
for Paradise can be a living hell.
Cruel bullies lurk there worse than any snake!
Take care if you should visit Eden’s Lake.
Events there made a strong man shriek and shake,
and if they talked, the trees alone would tell. . .
Take care if you should visit Eden’s Lake.
For Paradise can be a living hell.

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