Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

Summer Holiday- Nursery Rhyme

don’t jump and hop on the boat,
don't make it rock when afloat,
drop a pebble in the pond,
watch the ripples spread around!
we are on a ride with dad,
all so happy, all so glad!

schools are shut for holiday,
Sun is out so we can play,
take our turns on garden swing,
or play catch with rubber ring,
Mum brings food we love to munch,
burger chips favourite lunch!

bed times can be as much fun,
bathed and fresh after the Sun,
Gran’s stories of stars and moon,
we should all be asleep soon,
we shall dream till morning light,
so farewell now and good night!

Written 24/03/2021
Nursery Rhyme 3
Eve Roper sponsored!
7 syllables each line
3 stanzas with 6 lines each.

each stanza is a nursery rhyme on its own but can also be read as one big Nursery rhyme!

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Anne-Lise Andresen April 7, 2021 at 11:59 AM - Not just one ... but three in a row ... wonderful to read, Krish :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Krish Radhakrishna April 7, 2021 at 12:01 PM Thanks Anne lise!:) always happy to have you visit!

Beryl Edmonds April 6, 2021 at 5:36 PM Congratulations on your win Krish! That’s a lovely nursery rhyme for children to read and recite, life for kiddies should be fun and fun shines through the poem, love it... Belle Krish Radhakrishna April 6, 2021 at 7:52 PM Thanks Belle:)! Delighted with your visit and kind words! Blessings and Good wishes.

Sam Kauffman April 6, 2021 at 11:18 AM This is an absolute charming delight Krish! It is filled with the happy memories and joy of summer vacation. I especially love the reference to the feel of "bathed and fresh" after the sun" and all of the family references on holiday. These are experiences I vividly remember with a :). Congratulations on your win. Blessings of joy to you! Krish Radhakrishna April 6, 2021 at 1:40 PM Thanks Sam!! Childhood memories and experiences come alive when we recite NR! I am so pleased mine had a similar effect. I had a great childhood! I just try and go back to it! Much appreciate your kind words!:)

Kim Merryman April 6, 2021 at 11:09 AM Great rhythm and rhyme, Krish! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M Krish Radhakrishna April 6, 2021 at 1:42 PM Thanks Kim! Happy you like it! Blessings and good wishes!:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 6, 2021 at 6:51 AM Congratulations on your awesome win. Yes, every stanza could be a rhyming poem by itself! Children will love to read this. BW ~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna April 6, 2021 at 1:43 PM Thanks Mala! NR make us to enact our childhood again! I have enjoyed writing these!

Alexis Y. April 5, 2021 at 10:31 PM Hi Krish, I really enjoyed your “nursery rhyme”poem. Congratulations on your first place win:-) Alexus Krish Radhakrishna April 5, 2021 at 10:45 PM Thanks Alexis!! Happy you like it!!

Eve Roper April 5, 2021 at 10:16 PM Krish, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve Krish Radhakrishna April 5, 2021 at 10:44 PM Thanks Eve! So very happy you liked it. Thanks for another lovely NR contest!!:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 31, 2021 at 5:52 PM Lovely, Krish. Kids like to recite nursery rhymes, now we all are! Keep writing more. BW ~ Mala Krish Radhakrishna March 31, 2021 at 10:55 PM Thanks Mala! Love nursery rhymes and yes could write more. There is a child trapped in all of us waiting to be appreciated and as curious and worry free as always!! Best wishes

Jan Allison March 24, 2021 at 2:30 PM how clever to do three poems Krish each one stands as a cute poem in its own right:-) hugs Jan xx Krish Radhakrishna March 24, 2021 at 2:42 PM Thanks Jan. Hope children find it easy to remember and recite!