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Summer Holiday- Nursery Rhyme

don’t jump and hop on the boat, don't make it rock when afloat, drop a pebble in the pond, watch the ripples spread around! we are on a ride with dad, all so happy, all so glad! schools are shut for holiday, Sun is out so we can play, take our turns on garden swing, or play catch with rubber ring, Mum brings food we love to munch, burger chips favourite lunch! bed times can be as much fun, bathed and fresh after the Sun, Gran’s stories of stars and moon, we should all be asleep soon, we shall dream till morning light, so farewell now and good night! Written 24/03/2021 Nursery Rhyme 3 Eve Roper sponsored! 7 syllables each line 3 stanzas with 6 lines each. each stanza is a nursery rhyme on its own but can also be read as one big Nursery rhyme!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/7/2021 11:59:00 AM

- Not just one ... but three in a row ... wonderful to read, Krish :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/7/2021 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Anne lise!:) always happy to have you visit!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/6/2021 5:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Krish! That’s a lovely nursery rhyme for children to read and recite, life for kiddies should be fun and fun shines through the poem, love it... Belle

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/6/2021 7:52:00 PM

Thanks Belle:)! Delighted with your visit and kind words! Blessings and Good wishes.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/6/2021 11:18:00 AM

This is an absolute charming delight Krish! It is filled with the happy memories and joy of summer vacation. I especially love the reference to the feel of "bathed and fresh" after the sun" and all of the family references on holiday. These are experiences I vividly remember with a :). Congratulations on your win. Blessings of joy to you!

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/6/2021 1:40:00 PM

Thanks Sam!! Childhood memories and experiences come alive when we recite NR! I am so pleased mine had a similar effect. I had a great childhood! I just try and go back to it! Much appreciate your kind words!:)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/6/2021 11:09:00 AM

Great rhythm and rhyme, Krish! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/6/2021 1:42:00 PM

Thanks Kim! Happy you like it! Blessings and good wishes!:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 4/6/2021 6:51:00 AM

Congratulations on your awesome win. Yes, every stanza could be a rhyming poem by itself! Children will love to read this. BW ~ Mala

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/6/2021 1:43:00 PM

Thanks Mala! NR make us to enact our childhood again! I have enjoyed writing these!

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/5/2021 10:31:00 PM

Hi Krish, I really enjoyed your “nursery rhyme”poem. Congratulations on your first place win:-) Alexus

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/5/2021 10:45:00 PM

Thanks Alexis!! Happy you like it!!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/5/2021 10:16:00 PM

Krish, great rhythm in this great nursery rhyme. Congratulations on your win. . Please join me at my blog Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest - Eve Roper's Blog (poetrysoup.com) Hugs Eve

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/5/2021 10:44:00 PM

Thanks Eve! So very happy you liked it. Thanks for another lovely NR contest!!:)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/31/2021 5:52:00 PM

Lovely, Krish. Kids like to recite nursery rhymes, now we all are! Keep writing more. BW ~ Mala

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/31/2021 10:55:00 PM

Thanks Mala! Love nursery rhymes and yes could write more. There is a child trapped in all of us waiting to be appreciated and as curious and worry free as always!! Best wishes

Jan Allison

Date: 3/24/2021 2:30:00 PM

how clever to do three poems Krish each one stands as a cute poem in its own right:-) hugs Jan xx

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 3/24/2021 2:42:00 PM

Thanks Jan. Hope children find it easy to remember and recite!