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Chasing Rainbows###
When I was a child I had heard it told#
At the end of a rainbow there's a pot of gold.#
Then one day I seen a rainbow in the sky#
It seemed to call to me i knew I had to try#
So I headed out of town with gold on my mind,#
With my eyes on the sky, my riches I would find.#
I was oblivious to the world or where I was going#
Then the rainbow vanished without me knowing.#
As I looked around, it was behind me now#
I must have passed it but I don’t know how.#
I took off running to find my treasure again#
As I was getting close and I noticed it then.#
The rainbow had ended right there at home#
I didn’t need my travels. I never had to roam.#
The riches I found that brought my life pleasure#
Was the love of my family that I'll always
treasure.#
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