Warm Winter

Posted by Michael Maul on 11/28/2025 9:17:29 PM
I was anxious to dwell at the door of your dreams. My desire too weak to serve as a continence to your needs. If my love be unrequitted then how can I rise above the hopelessness of my solitude within your embrace

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Comment by Kim Rodrigues on 7/15/2026 3:17:44 PM

Consider line breaks: I was anxious/to dwell at the door/ of your dreams. My desire/too weak to serve/ (…I don’t like the word “continence” here.) If my love be/unrequited, then how/ etc… just an example

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