The Ghosts
Smith, great writer of stories, drank; found it immortalized his pen;
Fused in his brain-pan, else a blank, heavens of glory now and then;
Gave him the magical genius touch; God-given power to gouge out, fling
Flat in your face a soul-thought -- Bing!
Twiddle your heart-strings in his clutch. "Bah!" said Smith, "let my body lie
stripped to the buff in swinish shame,
If I can blaze in the radiant sky out of adoring stars my name.
Sober am I nonentitized; drunk am I more than half a god.
Well, let the flesh be sacrificed; spirit shall speak and shame the clod.
Who would not gladly, gladly give Life to do one thing that will live?"
Smith had a friend, we'll call him Brown; dearer than brothers were those two.
When in the wassail Smith would drown, Brown would rescue and pull him through.
When Brown was needful Smith would lend; so it fell as the years went by,
Each on the other would depend: then at the last Smith came to die.
There Brown sat in the sick man's room, still as a stone in his despair;
Smith bent on him his eyes of doom, shook back his lion mane of hair;
Said: "Is there one in my chosen line, writer of forthright tales my peer?
Look in that little desk of mine; there is a package, bring it here.
Story of stories, gem of all; essence and triumph, key and clue;
Tale of a loving woman's fall; soul swept hell-ward, and God! it's true.
I was the man -- Oh, yes, I've paid, paid with mighty and mordant pain.
Look! here's the masterpiece I've made out of my sin, my manhood slain.
Art supreme! yet the world would stare, know my mistress and blaze my shame.
I have a wife and daughter -- there! take it and thrust it in the flame."
Brown answered: "Master, you have dipped pen in your heart, your phrases sear.
Ruthless, unflinching, you have stripped naked your soul and set it here.
Have I not loved you well and true? See! between us the shadows drift;
This bit of blood and tears means You -- oh, let me have it, a parting gift.
Sacred I'll hold it, a trust divine; sacred your honour, her dark despair;
Never shall it see printed line: here, by the living God I swear."
Brown on a Bible laid his hand; Smith, great writer of stories, sighed:
"Comrade, I trust you, and understand. Keep my secret!" And so he died.
Smith was buried -- up soared his sales; lured you his books in every store;
Exquisite, whimsy, heart-wrung tales; men devoured them and craved for more.
So when it slyly got about Brown had a posthumous manuscript,
Jones, the publisher, sought him out, into his pocket deep he dipped.
"A thousand dollars?" Brown shook his head. "The story is not for sale, " he said.
Jones went away, then others came. Tempted and taunted, Brown was true.
Guarded at friendship's shrine the fame of the unpublished story grew and grew.
It's a long, long lane that has no end, but some lanes end in the Potter's field;
Smith to Brown had been more than friend: patron, protector, spur and shield.
Poor, loving-wistful, dreamy Brown, long and lean, with a smile askew,
Friendless he wandered up and down, gaunt as a wolf, as hungry too.
Brown with his lilt of saucy rhyme, Brown with his tilt of tender mirth
Garretless in the gloom and grime, singing his glad, mad songs of earth:
So at last with a faith divine, down and down to the Hunger-line.
There as he stood in a woeful plight, tears a-freeze on his sharp cheek-bones,
Who should chance to behold his plight, but the publisher, the plethoric Jones;
Peered at him for a little while, held out a bill: "NOW, will you sell?"
Brown scanned it with his twisted smile: "A thousand dollars! you go to hell!"
Brown enrolled in the homeless host, sleeping anywhere, anywhen;
Suffered, strove, became a ghost, slave of the lamp for other men;
For What's-his-name and So-and-so in the abyss his soul he stripped,
Yet in his want, his worst of woe, held he fast to the manuscript.
Then one day as he chewed his pen, half in hunger and half despair,
Creaked the door of his garret den; Dick, his brother, was standing there.
Down on the pallet bed he sank, ashen his face, his voice a wail:
"Save me, brother! I've robbed the bank; to-morrow it's ruin, capture, gaol.
Yet there's a chance: I could to-day pay back the money, save our name;
You have a manuscript, they say, worth a thousand -- think, man! the shame. . . ."
Brown with his heart pain-pierced the while, with his stern, starved face,
and his lips stone-pale,
Shuddered and smiled his twisted smile: "Brother, I guess you go to gaol."
While poor Brown in the leer of dawn wrestled with God for the sacred fire,
Came there a woman weak and wan, out of the mob, the murk, the mire;
Frail as a reed, a fellow ghost, weary with woe, with sorrowing;
Two pale souls in the legion lost; lo! Love bent with a tender wing,
Taught them a joy so deep, so true, it seemed that the whole-world fabric shook,
Thrilled and dissolved in radiant dew; then Brown made him a golden book,
Full of the faith that Life is good, that the earth is a dream divinely fair,
Lauding his gem of womanhood in many a lyric rich and rare;
Took it to Jones, who shook his head: "I will consider it," he said.
While he considered, Brown's wife lay clutched in the tentacles of pain;
Then came the doctor, grave and grey; spoke of decline, of nervous strain;
Hinted Egypt, the South of France -- Brown with terror was tiger-gripped.
Where was the money? What the chance? Pitiful God! . . . the manuscript!
A thousand dollars! his only hope! he gazed and gazed at the garret wall. . . .
Reached at last for the envelope, turned to his wife and told her all.
Told of his friend, his promise true; told like his very heart would break:
"Oh, my dearest! what shall I do? shall I not sell it for your sake?"
Ghostlike she lay, as still as doom; turned to the wall her weary head;
Icy-cold in the pallid gloom, silent as death . . . at last she said:
"Do! my husband? Keep your vow! Guard his secret and let me die. . . .
Oh, my dear, I must tell you now -- the women he loved and wronged was I;
Darling! I haven't long to live: I never told you -- forgive, forgive!"
For a long, long time Brown did not speak; sat bleak-browed in the wretched room;
Slowly a tear stole down his cheek, and he kissed her hand in the dismal gloom.
To break his oath, to brand her shame; his well-loved friend, his worshipped wife;
To keep his vow, to save her name, yet at the cost of what? Her life!
A moment's space did he hesitate, a moment of pain and dread and doubt,
Then he broke the seals, and, stern as fate, unfolded the sheets and spread them out. . . .
On his knees by her side he limply sank, peering amazed -- each page was blank.
(For oh, the supremest of our art are the stories we do not dare to tell,
Locked in the silence of the heart, for the awful records of Heav'n and Hell.)
Yet those two in the silence there, seemed less weariful than before.
Hark! a step on the garret stair, a postman knocks at the flimsy door.
"Registered letter!" Brown thrills with fear; opens, and reads, then bends above:
"Glorious tidings! Egypt, dear! The book is accepted -- life and love."
Literary Analysis
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Summary
Robert William Service stages this poem as a dramatic narrative about friendship, artistic vanity, loyalty, and the dangerous romance of self-exposure. Smith, the celebrated writer, has built a reputation on work he believes is intensified by sin, suffering, and personal disgrace. Before he dies, he entrusts Brown with a supposedly explosive manuscript that would ruin the reputation of the woman in the story and stain Smith's family name. Brown's devotion is then tested in a series of escalating pressures: publishers offer money, hardship pushes him toward betrayal, and family need tempts him to break his promise.
The poem gradually reveals that Brown's loyalty is not just sentimental but ethical, even sacrificial. He protects the manuscript through poverty, humiliation, and moral conflict until the final twist exposes the supposed masterpiece as blank pages. That revelation reframes everything: the true art in the poem is not the scandalous confession Smith imagined, but the silent burdens people carry and the stories they refuse to weaponize. The closing lines suggest that the deepest human truths may remain unspoken, preserved in conscience rather than published as art.
Theme
- Friendship and loyalty - Brown repeatedly chooses fidelity over profit, comfort, and social approval, making friendship the poem's strongest moral force.
- The ethics of art - The poem questions whether artistic greatness justifies cruelty, self-display, or the exploitation of private pain.
- Silence and restraint - What is withheld matters as much as what is spoken; the blank manuscript becomes a tribute to the dignity of unshared suffering.
- Sacrifice and poverty - Brown's integrity is tested through hunger, homelessness, and family crisis, showing that moral choices are never abstract.
- Appearance versus truth - Smith's dramatic confession and the expected scandal suggest a sensational truth, but the ending reveals that appearances can mislead completely.
- Redemption through love - Brown's bond with his wife and his care for Smith both move the poem toward compassion rather than exposure or revenge.
Literary Devices
- Narrative frame - The poem tells a story in stages, using action and reversal to build suspense until the final revelation changes the meaning of earlier events.
- Irony - The anticipated scandalous manuscript turns out to be blank, undercutting assumptions about confession, genius, and literary value.
- Dialogue - Direct speech reveals character quickly, especially Smith's vanity and Brown's stubborn conscience.
- Repetition - Repeated references to the manuscript, the thousand dollars, and the choice to sell or not sell reinforce the pressure Brown faces.
- Contrast - The poem sets fame against poverty, public success against private suffering, and dramatic self-display against quiet loyalty.
- Hyperbole - Smith's grand claims about art and genius reflect a deliberately inflated voice that fits the poem's satirical edge.
- Imagery - Stark images of hunger, garrets, sickness, and death create a grim physical world that sharpens the moral stakes.
- Twist ending - The blank pages at the end reclassify the entire narrative and deliver the poem's strongest emotional and philosophical impact.
Symbolism
- The manuscript - It symbolizes the burden of private truth, the temptation to profit from suffering, and the difference between public art and moral responsibility.
- The blank pages - They symbolize silence, restraint, and the stories that should remain unspoken because telling them would cause needless harm.
- The Bible - Brown's oath on the Bible symbolizes sacred trust and the seriousness of his promise.
- Jones, the publisher - He symbolizes commercial pressure and the market's willingness to buy scandal as entertainment.
- The garret - Brown's cramped room symbolizes poverty, isolation, and the stripped-down condition in which integrity is tested.
- The bank robbery - Dick's crime symbolizes desperation and the pressure that pushes ordinary people toward moral collapse.
Tone
Service's tone is witty, sardonic, and morally pointed, especially in the way he presents Smith's inflated ideas about genius and Brown's stubborn decency. Even when the poem turns serious, it keeps a brisk storytelling energy that gives the narrative a slightly theatrical feel. For the reader, the mood shifts repeatedly: amusement gives way to tension, then to sympathy, and finally to a quiet sense of relief and moral surprise. The ending softens the harshness of the preceding events, leaving an atmosphere of hard-won tenderness rather than scandal.
Historical Context
Service wrote in a period when narrative verse, dramatic monologue, and humorous rhymed storytelling remained popular with a broad readership. His work often combines a rugged, accessible style with frontier realism, satire, and strong plot-driven momentum. This poem reflects that popular late-nineteenth- and early-twentieth-century taste for verse that could entertain while still delivering a moral punch.
The poem also belongs to a larger literary culture fascinated by authorship, confession, and the public appetite for intimate revelation. It pushes against the notion that art must feed on exposure and scandal, instead suggesting that restraint can be a higher form of truth. That tension would have resonated in an age increasingly shaped by mass publishing, celebrity writers, and the commercial value of personal disclosure.