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I took a trip last night into my dreams To a place that I'm sure no one has seen The sky was black as the darkest of nights But everything else was a spectrum of light With no one around but still voices I hear When all of a sudden a doorway appeared A sign on the door said welcome, come in And that's where the story of this journey begins When I turned the knob and pushed open the door I almost stepped in when I noticed no floor I heard a voice tell me "do not be afraid" "This is a journey of the choices you made" "You see life is a journey that everyone takes And your judged in this world by the choices you make You had the choice to do wrong or right You chose to do wrong and stand there and fight" "So now close your eyes and enter this room And witness events to your upcoming doom" I shut my eyes and I walked through the air When I looked to the left a doorway was there I opened the door and started to scream I wanted to wake from this terrible dream What I saw in that room will haunt me for life It was the bodies of my children and my beautiful wife I screamed at the voice "why did you bring me here" He said," it is time to face my worse fear Now go to your family and look in their eyes" But I couldn't move and I started to cry Finally I walked over till I came to my son I couldn't do anything the damage was done I looked in his eyes and saw what he'd seen The moment he died he was crying for me Each child that I went to their eyes were the same Before each one of them died they cried out my name I couldn't take anymore so I asked," could we go" He said," not quite yet there's something else I must show" "You see, you left them behind when you went to jail" "But I hadn't a choice" I stared to yell "Then who made the choice when you committed that crime" "So then why punish them if the fault was all mine" "They died whenever you spun out of control Cause you were responsible when you took on the role Of father and husband to the family you see That is laying before you and will no longer be" "So what will it be the choice is on you But remember your choices could make this come true You have the choice to forget what you've seen And continue your life the way that you please" "Just remember the choices you make for yourself Not only affect you they affect someone else So now I shall leave you to let you decide And I hope that all this has made you realize" "It's not only on you when you choose the wrong road Your family and friends have to help carry the load" When I finally woke up I just started to grin I was given the chance to change this journey's end This was an actual dream that I had while sitting in jail, so I wrote it down. It isn't a very good one as far as rhythm, but I like the story and the message.
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