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"When Adam First Saw Eve" All alone in a Garden of Beauty Adam thought, "WOW!!!..... this is all mine! I can hang out, take naps, do whatever I want to- MAN!!!..... I'll do this ALL the time!" Without...the slightest care, in this, his new world, see...... he didn't even know that he had a heart "MAN!!!.... I feel like the "KING OF EVERYTHING! From my Eden..... I WILL NEVER PART!" One afternoon, after hanging out all morning, he felt a yawn coming on! He thought..... "I'll lie down and take a short nap then get up and do my hanging out 'til dawn!" See..... Adam didn't have the slightest clue of what was in store for him! He was about to get the "SHOCK" of his life, for a change in his world he was.....on the brim!!! When he awoke and he opened his eyes he noticed all the creatures were standing still! Something had their undivided attention- "Let me go take a look- Yeah....that I will!" LO....and BEHOLD, to his surprise, what he saw knocked him three steps back!!! His jaw dropped to the ground as he shouted out loud..... "WHOA!!!..... WHO IN THE FREAK IS THAT!!!" His heart started to pound "SO FAST"..... that he grabbed his chest with both hands!!! Sounds started coming out of his mouth..... "WHAT'S HAPPENING TO ME???- I DO NOT UNDERSTAND!!!" This new "MS. WHATEVER" turned and looked at him, upon her face came a lovely smile! Adam jumped straight up in the air....he jumped up in the air a good mile!!! When he came down he looked around and saw- there was no other one like SHE!!! He said..... "I am the luckiest MAN of all time!!!- WHOA!!!..... I think SHE LIKES ME!!! He started babbling..... he even tried to sing a song! How much more "HAPPY" could he be??? He looked up and kept saying repeatedly, to the sky..... "THANK YOU GOD, for giving HER to me!!!" He kept saying this over and over again for he couldn't take his eyes off of her! He said..... "WHOA!!!-man"..... "WHOA!!!-man"..... "WHOA!!!-man"..... "WHOA!!!--- MAN!!! What a beautiful "WHOA!!!-MAN" is SHE!!! Now..... that moment "WHEN ADAM FIRST SAW EVE" completely changed the entire atmosphere! The rest we do know, so this is a good spot to end this poem..... right here! (WTA-IV) 3/5/2016
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