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Once upon a time Man asked God Free Will For he thought that it would be such a thrill God gave Man what he asked for Then Man asked a little more: Me, do as I please, Thee Lord, pay the bill! © Demetrios Trifiatis 18 November 2015 *ATTENTION this poem was posted yesterday and received eight comments and 73 visits, unfortunately my computer did it again and deleted it, so I post it again! These are my replies to the comments received: 11/19/2015 1:32:00 AM Your reply to a comment: "Neither did I, my friend, M.M., however I wished to stress the fact that Man asks God to do everything for him but Man on the other hand is not willing to do as much for God. I know you are a very upright critic therefore your comment is a vote of confidence that I have succeeded without revering less our LORD! Thank you, Marugu Mo, for your visit and comment!! " 11/18/2015 6:31:00 PM Your reply to a comment: "Yes, the ultimate price He paid for us, dear diane. The question is: How grateful are we for His sacrifice? Thank you! " 11/18/2015 6:29:00 PM Your reply to a comment: "My dearest brother, David, so gracious of you to visit and comment. Thank you very much!" 11/18/2015 6:28:00 PM Your reply to a comment: "Kim, my dear, thank you so very much for your lovely visit and comment! Hugs!" 11/18/2015 6:27:00 PM Your reply to a comment: "Yes, He did! Didn't he? But have we learned? Thank you dearest Alexis, for your delightful visit and comment!" 11/18/2015 6:26:00 PM Your reply to a comment: "So pleased to visit me, pal! Thank you for your comment. You are so right!" 11/18/2015 9:34:00 AM Your reply to a comment: "Thank you dearest, Catie for your precious visit!" 11/18/2015 8:27:00 AM Your reply to a comment: "Thank you, Silent One, for your comment." 11/18/2015 8:26:00 AM Your reply to a comment: "Thank you so much, Broken Wings. You so kind!"
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