Login
|
Join PoetrySoup
Home
Submit Poems
Login
Sign Up
Member Home
My Poems
My Quotes
My Profile & Settings
My Inboxes
My Outboxes
Soup Mail
Contest Results/Status
Contests
Poems
Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Dictionary
Types of Poems
Videos
Resources
Syllable Counter
Articles
Forum
Blogs
Poem of the Day
New Poems
Anthology
Grammar Check
Greeting Card Maker
Classifieds
Quotes
Short Stories
Member Area
Member Home
My Profile and Settings
My Poems
My Quotes
My Short Stories
My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder
Soup Social
Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us
Member Poems
Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Random
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread
Member Poets
Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest
Famous Poems
Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100
Famous Poets
Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War
Poetry Resources
Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Email Poem
Your IP Address: 18.218.221.53
Your Email Address:
Required
Email Address Not Valid.
To Email Address:
Email Address Not Valid.
Required
Subject
Required
Personal Note:
Poem Title:
Poem
AT THE REQUEST OF BEV SMITH... Carousel It was the music that caught my ear, So I followed and saw the lights. Totally mesmerized, I drew near And beheld a captivating sight. Beautiful creatures swiftly moved. Quite festively they were prancing. White steeds with painted hooves, Whirled around, happily dancing. They slowed in a change of pace, Arched necks all turned my way. With such power and total grace, One winked at me, a dappled gray. He beckoned me and so I went. Music flowed long into the night. Caught up in rhythm til I was spent, Not caring if it was wrong or right. Upon his back, we circled 'round. His thick mane flying in the wind. My hair escaped, came unbound, Then the lights softly dimmed. Subtle seduction, no need for words. He set my whole world into a spin. My beating heart was all I heard. It was in that moment I gave in. What a mystical night of fantasy. We soared like birds on the wing. Never in my life had I felt so free. Together we grabbed the brass ring. A thief in the night, he stole my heart. But harsh winds had started to gust. We were swept away, torn apart. Our brass ring had turned to rust. I was blinded by such a cruel storm. The carousel was knocked off course. I prayed that he'd not met with harm, My steed ~ my dappled gray horse. There was no music to be heard. I found him broken, on his side. I offered comfort with my words, "Get up. We can finish our ride." My breath wasted in tearful plea. Our journey had reached an end. Black glassy eyes stared up at me. I'll never ride on a carousel again
CAPTCHA Preview
Type the characters you see in the picture
Required