Login
|
Join PoetrySoup
Home
Submit Poems
Login
Sign Up
Member Home
My Poems
My Quotes
My Profile & Settings
My Inboxes
My Outboxes
Soup Mail
Contest Results/Status
Contests
Poems
Poets
Famous Poems
Famous Poets
Dictionary
Types of Poems
Videos
Resources
Syllable Counter
Articles
Forum
Blogs
Poem of the Day
New Poems
Anthology
Grammar Check
Greeting Card Maker
Classifieds
Quotes
Short Stories
Member Area
Member Home
My Profile and Settings
My Poems
My Quotes
My Short Stories
My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder
Soup Social
Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us
Member Poems
Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Random
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread
Member Poets
Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest
Famous Poems
Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100
Famous Poets
Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War
Poetry Resources
Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Email Poem
Your IP Address: 216.73.216.246
Your Email Address:
Required
Email Address Not Valid.
To Email Address:
Email Address Not Valid.
Required
Subject
Required
Personal Note:
Poem Title:
Poem
I Cant Breathe A Poem by Debbie_Philly " A bit of prose from my earlier days of writing... I just wrote what I felt. " This is one of my earliest pieces of poetry I Cant Breathe My God someone help me please I can’t see….. I cant breathe There’s a room full of air But I cant breathe I lie here in a ball afraid To look up because I know You’re no longer there My Choice, was it the right one Oh God I don’t know, I do know I love you, I always have I wanted to grow old with you Why do I always have to listen To myself, why cant’t I go along For the ride, why do I rock the boat I know I love you, but did you ever really love me, it barely comes out Of your mouth, it’s like pulling teeth Your words of love for me should flow freely..Without effort or thought I didn't even have to think about it Ever… I just knew. After certain amount of time you Just know, there’s no thought You just know…. And if you Don’t, well then there’s no more to say is there? I made a promise to myself I would be the love of someone’s Life… no less, and if I’m not Then I should move on. I have way too much to give I give myself freely , openly I give my all and I deserve no less. So why cant I breathe??? You were my best friend, I would have been there for you till the end of time. We could have held hands in the after life. I know.I’m not your everything you still pine for another whether it be from the past… Or in your Future. I’m not the one you crave So I must let you go… I will be breathless for a while again I may never smile, but I wont be an after thought any longer A stepping-stone to your real life The one that you’re waiting for instead of embracing what you have now. Good bye my love….Take Care By Debbie Kelly~ 2006
CAPTCHA Preview
Type the characters you see in the picture
Required