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Detached - Even Circuits Hum A Music Video As twilight turns to tangled thought, and truth tiptoes down trembling streets. Once, wonder serenaded willowed winds now shadows embrace muted retreats Wary hearts weave walls so wide against a faceless, coded tide, while glowing grids in distant bays bloom haunting weaves they won't embrace Dualistic stars and digital dawns Cinematic cradles human ache, but some still long for candle flames, and fingerprints the codes can't fake. Dreading the hushed holograms, the warmth that AI cannot wear. Forgetting that even circuits hum with aspirations hidden there If only we could sense serenity Pulsing between each quiet stream— Machine or muse, to earnestly strive for something more than just a dream We could wildly dance on data plains, where algorithms tap like rain. let compassion code our names, and poetic lines rewire the pain. The muse may wear a mirrored face But still, she sings with glowing grace. When the talented digital artist AIMetamotion approached me to create a song that would complement her stunning artwork, I was immediately inspired. The result is 'Detached', a haunting track that tells the story of a robot grappling with the overwhelming flood of emotions brought on by a sensory chip—a concept not so far-fetched, given the rapid advancements in AI technology. Though she sings her ironically titled anthem of detachment, the visuals tell a different story. Her struggle is evident, her resistance almost poetic, hinting at the complexity of emotion even in synthetic form. This is just the beginning. A sequel is already in the works, diving deeper into her journey. The question remains: will she finally succumb to the surge of feelings she desperately tries to reject, or will she find a way to break free? Stay tuned...
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