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I am writing a song with a familiar rhythm busting in my vein .I am writing a song with a familiar rhythm planted in the violin strings, and the base line is running thousand miles with ashes, rum and pie and message to come and see me before I “die.” It is riding high on the musical scale and the punch line is found at the end of the tail. I have been writing this music for the past five years but the sound keeps floating in the air and the beat is walking around in the street with the violin dancing passionately to the rhythm in my feet. I just cannot get this music out of my head I will live with it until I am “dead”. It resides around the sun with honey quoted on the bun and the drum with it miraculous beat is playing ping pong in the street. It keeps playing this relenting rhythm and a stronger sound keeps chiming in, I kept balancing the sound but it keeps forcing a stronger rhythm. The rhythm keeps surfacing on my brain but the arrangement is not quite the same. It’s A, B, C, D, E,F, G, A with the treble clef descending on A major scale. If I could just get this right this time, it will end the musical fight. The lyrics are clean but I cannot capture the big dream because the coordination is not stable and D major scale ascending in the treble clef is forcing me out of breath and the crown is marching around the throne asking for more. The piano keys are jumping up and down the town and the tone kept shifting and the lyrics keep shouting so the tenor and the base join the big race. D, E, F, G, H, B, C, D, when carefully arranged will bring luck for you and thee. I have been writing this song for five years and the sound keeps rumbling I my ears. It keeps going around searching for a stable ground but destiny will produce the right sound before ambition sinks into the ground. I began with the C major scale descending in the treble clef; C, B, A,G, F, E, D, C, you don’t have much time left, you need a producer and a digital designer to put it all together . This will be your best piece made out of concrete and steel, you will be the best seller when all the notes come rocking together and the heaven will be pleased.
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