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Our Paradise Advise—My Sweetest Love! My sweetest love hearest thou reverently my advice My advice is to leave now for our home—in paradise. Paradise blooming with rainbows and tasty red cherries Cherries, delicious mangoes, and bright sweet berries. Berries with our cottage in the midst with a skylight Skylight, gingerbread, and sunset—await us at twilight. Twilight and misting rain for showers on our lawn Lawn where we sing sweet songs with birds at dawn. Dawn where firefly’s lights soothing sweet moods Moods with ravens bringing us nice nourishing food. Food while sparrows build our soft resting nest Resting nest, my dear love—my darling, my sweetest. Sweetest we will wish upon the mellow shining stars, Stars shining above us—where we shall not be far! Author’s Notes: The “Linking Pin Sonnet” ending lines join with the same beginning word of the next line consecutively to the end of the sonnet. It has fourteen lines as each sonnet does. The “Linking Pin Sonnet” has a rhyming scheme of AABB CCDD EEFF GG. Each quatrain stanza has four line of two rhyming couplets, and the poem ends with a rhyming couplet. The “Linking Pin Sonnet” was created by Dr. Joseph S. Spence, Sr. (Me), January 15, 2017, while studying English literature, creative writing, the African Diaspora, and poetry, at the University of Wisconsin, Milwaukee, after studying twenty different sonnet forms and styles from different poets. There are multiple examples in my most recent 9th poetry book, “Sincerely Speaking Spiritually,” published February 18, 2020, on the link to Amazon.com below! https://www.amazon.com/Joseph-S-Spence-Sr/e/B0855CYRPS?ref_=dbs_p_ebk_r00_abau_000000.
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