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He walked into the place of my employment. I was the only one at work in that small convenience store. His aura was that of an angel with the hint of a devil in his grin. My attraction to him was immediate and amazing. Tall and dark, he was the Adonis of my dreams. I saw him from the corner of my eye as he lingered close by. My Adonis was also watching me! Daily that week he appeared around evening, flirting a bit and making small talk, his grin ever enchanting! I can’t remember of what we spoke. I was too lost in the beauty of his brown eyes. Finally, he asked me out. Why did he wait four long days? To his country he would return from his short vacation the very next day after our one and only night out. I was never to see my young man's dear angel face again. As I awaited his entrance to the store that big night, I was aching with longing to simply be near him. Other dates on which I’d gone were the most ordinary of tunes compared to the romantic aria that played out that precious night. We had driven off in his uncle’s Riviera, the car he'd borrowed. Like his caresses and kisses later that sweet night, even the automobile’s name is seered into my brain. By that one September night with him, I was left ASTOUNDED. Jan. 17, 2020 Though I used all the words, Astounded is my chosen word which best described that indelible night right before I turned 17.
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