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Beard looks weird, that's a lyrical genius to be feared, you wrote a 6 year song and got the facts wrong, fired with the hair and safety still on, I guess that scope's just a tele, with sights and hopes on the tele, Machine Bun Shelly, initials, MBS, Caps empty, Mostly Bull Sh…… a superficial sipping soup to his belly or is it breakfast for a serial prodigy, steadfast out selling cereal probably, problems with his intellectual property so he's just a prop to stop and see. 6'4 and standing taller, picking on a man, his wife and his daughter, who needs protection ay, you're a big and bad ball-less brawler, that's the shallowest level you can resort to, and though it's none of my bees wax, you did it to be witnessed and receive plaques, but it was easy and witless like corny flakes, the business doesn't need Autotune fakes, forcing the rhyme like all you want is a smoke, not literally you'd choke, that's such a weak joke, clearly begging for your songs to be bought up, as if we went from Shady please stand up, to worshipping a hairband on a no flair brand corrupt and yeah I admit some of it was good, generous, but look, with 6 years to write it should have been off the hook, this lame ass your best and you took as long as you could, when your next hits out you'll remember when you last stood, and you'll be mocked by the only line that was any good, MGK can't stand up, that'll get you like Cranbrook, from Cleveland Ohio, leave now and fly home. Note the depth and the many double entendre in this, written within an hour of hearing that diss, MGK's peak, now for the diss-appearance, I've heard you can't write your own lyrical sentence, that's dense, how you ever gona go the distance, now go into the distance with your spoon and bowl, you had your 15 minutes so back to your hole. Part 2: Picking the rhymes apart and taking a shot, on my page to read now. * the second line is a double entendre, a serious comment about Eminem and a sarcastic one about MGK, you know, cus rhyming beard and weird is amazing haa. * Hair and safety clip on * Just a tele, a telescope * Initials - cus MGK initials but Eminem doesn't M&M
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