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2/5/2013 2:04:30 AM
Blue Malika10 wrote:
onedaypigswillfly wrote:
Hey everyone, I'm 16 and this is my first poem that i've ever posted. I would like to know your thoughts, and thank you for your time!




Blue




The night is dark and silent

The thoughts come rolling in

And hour after hour

I wonder where you've been




If you ever think of me

In this deep dark night?

As when the moon above us shines

It's possible that you might




At one point we were one

So long ago it seems a crime

But our bond is of a love

One that will outlast time




If I ever saw you again

I'd ask how you've been keeping?

All I'd need is just one look

Our time all too fleeting




To say that I don't miss you

Would be an outright lie

Without you I am lost

I'm barely getting by




I wonder where you are

When we're so far apart

You're already gone

But never from my heart




I can't ever let it out

Or the sadness will grow

So until we meet again

It's best you don't know




So it's at night in the darkness

Where I think of you

And the night isn't black

But a dark shade of blue
2/5/2013 2:06:00 AM
Blue very good
2/14/2013 1:54:10 AM
Blood Spilled When I lost you.....


I fell, I fell hard...when i lost you..I cant catch my breath like i used too. Lost and confused, angry that you left. It wasn't your choice, I understand that. I didn't only lose you that dreadful day i also lost myself, my mind and my entire life cause it hasn't been the same. you loved me unconditionally how do i function without that now. My body still here but I'm dead inside from all the pain and sorrow i feel cause i will never see you or talk to you again. My mind likes to wonder now all on its on it's scary sometimes..I'm worried everyone will leave me all alone. I think of you alot, and smile cause you always made me laugh..I cant stand it..its not right...i feel like where in a dream all the time. You were the best grandfather, wasn't fair how you suffered up to your very last breath..you held on so long day after day cause u couldn't stand how you had to leave us that day. I remember talking to you and you would try to tell me something back..don't worry i know what is was I love you but i have to leave you i need u to know i will be watching you don't let yourself go....I know i told you its okay for you to go,,,but I'm sorry grandpa i lied,,,, I didn't want you to leave me i still needed you around, call me selfish I don't care, you belong here with me not away so far. I cant accept it or handle it the way I should cause my mind and my heart stopped doing thier work. everyone tells me snap out of it, act right, but i cant I don't know how i lost the one who guided me through life...I feel like a burden, all needy, like I'm in the way..so why do i stay? I need you to tell me that your okay...cause i cant move on like this i just cant, there is no way.
edited by lostin805 on 2/14/2013
edited by lostin805 on 2/14/2013
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