Concrete Poems | Examples

End Credits

On the last day of the week
you were the first person to ask me
on a movie date

          and this was the first time     I refrained from hesitation
        the first time in a long time     I've loaned my bones expose

                      and as it plays on     my unforgivable fidgeting
	                              begins     twisting in positions in my seat
		                       trying     to lay my head on your chest
	                             without     breaking my neck

                            and I’m sorry     I couldn’t just 
				                    become comfortable
		            and I’m sorry     it’s about more than
				                    just the movie
        		   and I’m sorry      I was more focused 
			                            on what I wanted taken 
				                    than was capable of giving
		           and I’m sorry      all I can do is sputter off              				                                                                                            
                                                    apologies after you've
				                    long since stopped listening

Premium Member Fibonacci

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FLOWERING :
In sequence.      
  A loop.                                                        Musical
      Nests.                                                 A             Visual
          Order.                                                               Seeded
                 Hidden.                                                    Encryption
                         Like a secret.               An  algorithmic code
                                    Harmony nesting in the seed 
                                                   Awaiting release

                                                              Fibonacci


Premium Member Eye Strain

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Definition of me







I AM A MOVING SPIRIT OF WELL-BEING DANCING IN THE MELODY OF MY OWN SONG.

Love

You are the light that fills my days,
       the warmth that wraps around my soul.
       In your eyes, I find a home, a place where
   time stops and hearts speak in whispers only
    we can hear. Love grows like roots beneath
       us, deep and quiet, but strong enough to
   lift us when we fall. In your touch, I feel
     the pulse of the world, beating with the
     promise of forever, tender and true.
     Together, we are whole, as one, in love,
               always.


Nightmare

Dark
         shapes
       twist and
      crawl in the
    corners of my
   mind. Silent
    whispers fill
     the air, cold
    and choking.
     A breath
     catches, then
     slips away as
    I reach for the
   light that’s too
    far to touch.
     Eyes watch
       from the
     depths of the
     void. I can’t
      move, can’t
      scream. I'm
    trapped inside
    the suffocating
      storm of my
     own fear, lost
   in a place where
     shadows never
     leave and hope
       fades to dark.

Cactus

Tall
         and
       still as
    the sun burns
   high above, the
   dry earth cracks
  with thirst. A lone
    cactus stands,
   its arms raised
  to the sky, seeking
   the rain that
   never comes.
   Shadows stretch
   long across the
    sand, the wind
     whispers soft
        secrets,
    and time stands
     still in the heat
         of the day.

Happiness Is Free

happiness is F—R—E—E
when shared
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                                     loving h~e~a~r~t~s~~

a gift with no
                                                e—n—d


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         s*u*n*b*u*r*s*t and rain F°A°L°L~
w~a~r~m, e
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                            d
                                u•r•i•n•g,
                                                  p_u_r_e

Premium Member Revisiting The Old pond

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         O
          R
          D
         S
       Basho
   Into the old pond
settling in. A cave

Premium Member She walks the Earth

In eyes
    sparkle of
      butterflies
                On
                  her
                  back
                             Wears
                                A shield
                                  Tough as
                                    That of
                                     an aged
                                     Turtle
.
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Have attempted Haiku in Concrete

Premium Member pain’s refrain

PAST refrain
I I I I I I I I I I
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I I I I I I I I I I
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I I I I I I I I I I
I I I I I I I I I I
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FUTURE pain

The Dance of Forgotten Dreams

like
                     shadows in
                  a slow-turning
                waltz, they drift—
             soft, unsummoned sighs
           from corners of the mind
         where dust forgets to settle,
       and yesterday pirouettes silently.
     dreams once bright now fade, tulle
   trailing in twilight, ankles kissed by
  cobwebs of sleep. Each step unwinds
 the golden thread of almost-memory,
   echoing rhythms never quite born,
     never quite gone. They circle,
        spiral, shimmer, vanish—
            the dance of
            forgotten
             dreams.

Beneath the Canvas of Night

.
            *         .
                 .        *
        *          .             *
   .            I lie still
                  under an ocean
        of       ink—each breath
   a whisper               rising
             into a velvet hush.
      My eyes          sail
          on silver threads
   stitched     across
       this dark tapestry.

            stars murmur
     their stories              slow,
         unfurling like soft
   lanterns in      the black.

              I vanish
        into                 wonder,

             beneath
         the
    canvas
         of
            night.

Premium Member concrete

 

O         I
am       so
sad     now
that  she  left
for  up  above.
Twenty  years
is  a  long  time
to  love  a cat,
this  sweet.
A kitten came
that  fit my  hand
all fluffy and purring,
she loved  to  cuddle
all  the  long  nights.
I held her in my arms
till her body was stone.
And now I go to the place
where I buried my beauty.
I  told my friends-   no, no, 
more cats  for this here  girl.
They say   just  give it  time!
Oh, oh my-  days are empty,
sometimes,  I hear her soft
meow  call, calling for me,
and that breaks my heart.
  Tears,
        now
          fall
       fall
          fall
        like
          rain
            on
               my
                   new
                       wee
                          cat.
cat

NUMBERS

Let's speak of numbers.
I’m a Kenyan 2.0,
With an ID to prove.
I own the code—254,
Been here since I was 0.

Gen Z did awaken,
Learning the art in math—
The topic on tax,
And the story of Zakayo.

Gen Z did awaken,
Learning history’s tale:
The beauty of freedom—independence,
Yet freedom fighters still fade.

And the Bill of Rights,
Freedom of speech,
To stand against the bill—
Its creator sickened the breach.

Gen Z did awaken,
To our new 'Leader,'
A master of language,
Crafting his best lies.

The world on hold,
Schools, hospitals, streets—
All in chaos, all closed,
Waiting for ‘Mr. President.’

To speak of numbers,
Of those lost in protests,
Lost in abductions,
And those gained in corruption.

Protests painted red with blood and tears.
A beacon of peace in pieces.
A home of 'hakuna matata'
Full of mournings,
Numbers adding in the statistics.

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