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11/16/2011 9:07:01 AM

Nicky Beaty
Posts: 4
I am very new to this, could you please let me know what you think. Thanks

The Best Days Of My Life
The best days of my life
Are the days I spend with you.
Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday
That’s just to name a few.

Each day that we’re together
It feels like something new.
I was only meant to like you
But this love inside me grew.

Who knew life could be so beautiful
I didn’t have a clue.
But every time I see your face
I now know that this is true.

Thursday, Friday, Saturday
That’s just to name a few.
The best days of my life
Are the days I spend with you.
edited by nufcnick on 11/16/2011
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12/13/2011 7:15:49 AM

sarah smith
Posts: 2
nice poem dear.. realy enjoy it..
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