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10/27/2011 11:35:07 AM
Jeremiah Walton
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I once burned a book
It was not a statement
It was the meaningless act of lighting a match
And dropping it on the inside of a paper spine column
Destruction to create new functions
Knowledge to heat, pervasive philosophical interactions
Kurt's own universe of coincidence and irrationality
Ended with ice nine
Mines coiled in embers snared
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10/28/2011 3:07:21 AM
Katrina Mcternan
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This is a very clever poem about the belief that the destruction of a book is sacriligious in some sense but you play this down and even go as far as to say its necessary in order for new ideas to develop.
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