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10/27/2011 5:53:16 AM

Tom Larrow
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A request to tell all of your kinfolk

That are inside Heavens Gate



To keep watch on one of my folk



For she has a special date



Their just east of South Dakota



Though she's in a different state



For these Doctor's in Minnesota



Want a team to secure her fate



Their are many special surgeons



Who all do their job first rate



Prayers are needed, even sermons



Don't want any wishes to be late



In spring they plan for her to home



I guess Grampa, will have to wait





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