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1/16/2011 2:25:44 PM

Trudy Schrader
Posts: 3
Ascending, Condescending, Apprehending
Building up, Tearing down, holding on
Creating, Destroying, Capturing

Standing, Falling, Binding
Pulling up, Pushing down, Putting on
Inventing, Relenting, Preventing

Erecting, Dissecting, Connecting
Rooting up, Cutting down, Latching on
Originating, Imitating, Eliminating

Written by Trudy Schrader
edited by legend on 1/16/2011
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