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1/9/2011 1:32:13 AM

George Stal
Posts: 2
Are we simply caricatures of I
Skulking self behind the skull
in thoughts and process ticking by, far
beyond the Alpha Beta too describe.
Instilling any eay, no exact way
Feeling All, percieved by you.
Fitting this enigma into the parameters
of language; willing tho flawed
in transcribing the flitting connections
gathered beyond the grasp of the others,
In turn trapped to sprout their skewered
insights ...
missing , always , what you meant.

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