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10/19/2010 1:21:05 PM

Diondra Johnson
Posts: 3
eyes cold as ice heart hard as stone just want to be left alone you hurt me once what makes you think i want to be hurt again you never really cared so i won't care either when i see you i'm blinded with rage i want to care but then i don't eyes cold as ice heart hard as stone

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Always Will Be DJ
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10/20/2010 11:08:15 AM

bidyut bikash brahma
Posts: 2
wow that was really cold. if words could kill then you would have committed the sin
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