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10/12/2010 5:12:24 PM
Raise your senses to infinity
Like a reptile your destiny follows
Grasping from your mouth salinity
Filling with some moments your hollows.
Raise your hands in the air
As the sirens are urgently calling
Until you find the truth that you bear
Paths are chosen.Into them you are crawling.
Raise your blessings to your world
Somebody listens in the merciless night.
Our time is not getting back cause it's sold.
At least we kept our glory safe and bright!
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