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9/4/2013 1:22:36 PM

cheung shun sang
Posts: 24
Ways….
World of china is talent however no upright.
Elitism does the good and bad.
Human well and good have four.
They are ways of four.
Reason manners all is one.
Justice and righteous is two.
Rectitude and clean is third.
Sense of honor or shame is fourth.
All the four above are humane ways that honor.
All the four above is need with loves and clear minds.
Most disgraces have associated benefits.
So as men loves to favor self then morals are hazard.
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9/11/2013 2:19:19 AM

scott thirtyseven
Posts: 12
I like the intention here, you've got a great message. I wonder however if an English grammar checker would help. Good stuff though, keep it up.
edited by scott 37 on 9/13/2013
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9/20/2013 10:47:22 AM

cheung shun sang
Posts: 24
scott 37 wrote:
I like the intention here, you've got a great message. I wonder however if an English grammar checker would help. Good stuff though, keep it up.
edited by scott 37 on 9/13/2013


Ah OK
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