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6/26/2013 8:57:19 PM
I can do no right by you,
And for that I'm sorry--
Like the goddesses of old you are the dawn,
A light so bright casting away shadows of the night--
For your love there could be no wrong.
As the Sun,
One can only glance at thee for you are so Beautiful to behold
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