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7/1/2010 7:11:09 AM
Catie Lindsey
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Hi Virginia, I think your poem is quite nice, it reads a little choppy though, because sentences are chopped. I wonder what it would look like if you wrote it in complete sentences. I know poetry is often this way, I do it a lot myself, this is really a nice poem, and I can't think of anything else to critique on it.  Catie
edited by Catie on 7/1/2010
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7/12/2010 2:15:29 PM
Virginia Mitchell
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TRhank you, Catie, for your comment! It's greatly appreciated!
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