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3/20/2013 10:16:26 AM
Regardless of our age in years, the wonders of our youth will reside.
Our dreams and hopes can never subside.
With the unfailing child-like apetite that you grow each day,
in my eyes you become younger and makes my heart want to play.
We will enjoy the great game of life together as we both enjoy today.
I appreciate your courage, hope, cheer, and beauty in everyway.
Then you excerise your delibrate choice of mind,
it forces me to relax and then unwind.
As I lay there across the bed I can feel your touch caressing me,
feather like fingers you trace down my back so comfortably.
With this gift that you give me so often and so much.
I live each day looking forward to your next touch.
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