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3/17/2013 3:43:16 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Can watch
Can't touch
It's a bubble of trouble
Turns my into Oscar the grouch


Unstoppable drama
Could lead to brain trauma
Can't let that be
I'll just keep my ora clean


Do my best
Keep my head afloat
No control
Let the trouble flow


Listen to the occasional bicker
Feel my radar flicker
When it's getting to hot
I make sure to step back a notch


Keep my space
Been to long
This situation
Should come with a warning
Or a date or expiration


I know you know
It's been said
You know how I feel
This is no natural disaster
A controlled situation
Blown up ten times faster


I refuse to support
A abusive mission,
You should abort


I stay miles apart
I'm a phone call away
Hoping you'll top off
Give yourself relief
Oh, one day
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