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12/14/2012 4:14:48 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Down in the dark
This is where pain grows

To kill the seed

Dive where no one knows

Swim through trenches,

Wet suit will only slow you down

When you've found the seed

Rush back up to the top

Before your lungs explode




Rushing back take note

Water will be bluer,

Sky clearer

Sun Peaking

This is the fresh air you've been seeking
edited by svlynn18 on 12/14/2012
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