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11/11/2012 7:42:19 AM
Sharon Van Buskirk
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Driving down the street
BOOM BOOM'
Listen to the Beat
BOOM BOOM
*Cringe..disgusted face* ..what's this?Kesha?...sure is
Playing that on the RADIO? That shouldbe ILLEGAL!
I want something new rocking my eardrum
Time for a CD.. Will it be Mr.Charles?
Miss Winehouse? Or Jurassic 5?
Hmmm..What will it be?
“Been friend for a long time, veryclose friend of mine”
Awww....*smile ear to ear*
Much better...
Now on what street do I turn?
edited by svlynn18 on 11/11/2012
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