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11/10/2012 8:32:59 PM

Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17
Tinzel twinkling bright;
star pearched upon its height.
Bulbs of red, green, and blue;
throw in a star and a cane or two.
The time of year is drawing close;
sing your songs and get your cheering dose.

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