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10/26/2012 4:36:29 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Thoughts....scattered the HE(in)AD.
They'realltiedtogether
By a tiny thread
They Bounce..
off.. other

each..
Thoughts,Thoughts_Thoughts...
Can really tie your tongue in knothhs.
edited by svlynn18 on 10/27/2012
edited by svlynn18 on 10/27/2012
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