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10/24/2012 2:26:14 AM
Sharon Van Buskirk
Why do people have love affairs withmoney?
It will never hug you and call youhoney!
It's something that will come and go
If that's used to keep life balanced,
I really hope you don't loose your bigtoe
When it's all gone and your staring atyour last wall
Will you think about your fortune 500brand in a picture down the hall?
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