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10/21/2012 8:45:48 PM

Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17
Walk the line, straddle the fire;
tested through time by desire.
Trials and tribulations, I've been the cause;
stop and ponder, time to pause.
Topped a hill, I've reached a peak;
wisdom of lessons learned is what I seek.
But one way to grow, theres a leap in my stride;
joy of contentment is now where I abide.

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10/28/2012 4:18:40 PM

Darrel Smith
Posts: 2
jspj1971 wrote:
Walk the line, straddle the fire;
tested through time by desire.
Trials and tribulations, I've been the cause;
stop and ponder, time to pause.
Topped a hill, I've reached a peak;
wisdom of lessons learned is what I seek.
But one way to grow, theres a leap in my stride;
joy of contentment is now where I abide.
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10/28/2012 4:19:17 PM

Darrel Smith
Posts: 2
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