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10/7/2012 1:18:30 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Writing isn't always easy,
Sometimes writing one sentence,
Can trigger thoughts making my mind toobreezy
I'll stop occasionally to look at mypaper..
Reminds me how humidity makes my hairfrizzy


Best when it's late at night,
With no distractions,
My wheels are too tired,
To turn in full action,


My thoughts slow down,
Ahhh, I can relax
Issues that bother me,
Go on paper seamlessly,


Thirty minutes later,
There's a couple stanzas
I either love it or hate it,
Many times,
I just pop the recycle bin lid.
edited by svlynn18 on 10/7/2012
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