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9/29/2012 10:14:20 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Vendors ready,
About an hour til start,
Year plus of prep,
It's no walk in the park


Creative drive in full speed,
Every situation plants a seed,
Networking channel in high demand,
Without it small guys fall in quicksand


Alive with the childhood glow
Proud of their fleets, it's shows,
Displays plotted to attract consumers
One showcase highlights Honeymooners,


The goal is to break even,
There's no instructions on playing thisgame Steven
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