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9/28/2012 7:33:12 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Cant do everything
Overcome resistance to help
Need love
Thank people
Reward good deeds
Own imperfections
Let yourself make mistakes
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9/29/2012 10:30:42 AM

Timothy Jacks
Posts: 1
The words are strong but to me I feel there is gaps In thought
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