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9/28/2012 7:32:45 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Why these battles present themselves?Unknown...
Out of my control,
Gotta let it roll,
What can I do?
Be honest and true,


Sometimes doesn't seem right,
Comes day by day,
Learning which ones to fight,
That's the trick


Dwell on the wrong,
Or concentrate on the good,
Have faith in your choices,
All will be mellow in the hood
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